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Memories by moonlight

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The sky is filled with an ocean of darkness
The moon's light pierces the nights sky,
The light finds a girl sitting alone
The darkness emanating deep within her soul.

The darkness retribution for her sins
but when will her payment be done,
The girl cries but her tears cannot be seen
her voice like a tree falling in an empty forest
goes unheard.

the girl is swallowed by the light
She dances and revels in it's warm,
her only reprieve from the darkness
a reminder of times before her sin.

Lo and behold
The moonlight offers the end to the repayment,
The girl looks to the moon once more
A memory of a distance past plays unhindered.

The night is late
The moon is low once more,
Atonement is nigh
A question answered.

as the sun kisses the night farewell
The girl can once more smile.
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astounding piece.